Distort Me
Breathe me
Until all I am is breathless
Break me
Until all I am is fractured
Ruin me
Until all I am is worthless
Burn me
Until all I am is ashes
Doubt me
Until all I am is faithless
Reverse me
Until all I am is inverted
Consume me
Until all I am is faceless
Distort me
Until all I am is static


i likes. missed your stuff.
krrrzzzzttt… nice one! esp the ending..
And you’re back =D and with a bang
Love it… always a pleasure reading you
good stuff man!
@Delilah – Thank u
@Whacko – Krrzzzzt….. Thanks dude
@Black Rose – Yeah I’m back, thank you as always
@Chavie – Thanks yo!
Finally
Loved this, loved the ending more
GOOOOOOOOD!!
@Sabby & Dili – Thanks guys
how about:
Distort me
Until all I am is senseless
?
and
Break me
Until all I am is pieces
just to keep the rhyming going on
(:
‘Break me, until all I am is pieces’ is good. Should have gone with that.
Distort-senseless is also good, but the first line that came to me was ‘Distort me, until all i am is static’. After that everything else fell into place, so I didn’t want to change that
and then i’m tagging you also to write a letter to your past self
Naice.
This is beautiful.
@brandix – Thanks for the tag. Will get to it soon
@Gadget Girl & Scrump – Thank you very much
wow… niiice…