Distort Me

Breathe me
Until all I am is breathless
Break me
Until all I am is fractured

Ruin me
Until all I am is worthless
Burn me
Until all I am is ashes

Doubt me
Until all I am is faithless
Reverse me
Until all I am is inverted

Consume me
Until all I am is faceless
Distort me
Until all I am is static

~ by The Unsilent on November 11, 2009.

16 Responses to “Distort Me”

  1. i likes. missed your stuff.

  2. krrrzzzzttt… nice one! esp the ending..

  3. And you’re back =D and with a bang :D Love it… always a pleasure reading you :)

  4. good stuff man! :D

  5. @Delilah – Thank u :)

    @Whacko – Krrzzzzt….. Thanks dude

    @Black Rose – Yeah I’m back, thank you as always

    @Chavie – Thanks yo! :)

  6. Finally :D
    Loved this, loved the ending more :)

  7. GOOOOOOOOD!!

  8. @Sabby & Dili – Thanks guys :)

  9. how about:
    Distort me
    Until all I am is senseless
    ?

  10. and
    Break me
    Until all I am is pieces

    just to keep the rhyming going on
    (:

  11. ‘Break me, until all I am is pieces’ is good. Should have gone with that.

    Distort-senseless is also good, but the first line that came to me was ‘Distort me, until all i am is static’. After that everything else fell into place, so I didn’t want to change that :)

  12. and then i’m tagging you also to write a letter to your past self :)

  13. Naice.

  14. This is beautiful.

  15. @brandix – Thanks for the tag. Will get to it soon :)

    @Gadget Girl & Scrump – Thank you very much :)

  16. wow… niiice…

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