The Last Dance
March 8th, 2010 § 10 Comments
I turn my camera on by Slightly Amazing Grace
I see you dance in the light where the world is yours
In false pretense, I sit in the dark watching my cure
Listening to your heart sing in a cadenced melody
Watching your eyes, interpreting their story
As you pick up your steps, you brighten your play
Glowing brighter than the light in your way
Illuminated in brightness, white light blindness
The words best said are the ones unspoken
The path best walked is the one not chosen
I wake up to a room of numbness and fear
And the sound of your silence
Reminds me the end is near
Sounds familiar
One of my favourites. Loved each and every sentence and rhyme
*hugs*
I really liked this. Brilliantly done.
Loved this one mate… nicely written!
@Sabby – Yes yes, u convinced me to post this.
@Michele – Thank you for visiting.
@BlackRose & Chavie – Thanks doods!!
One of the best i’ve read! Such simplicity and such depth, a fantastic combination! Loved it, specially,
The words best said are the ones unspoken
The path best walked is the one not chosen
good!
Lovely!
Stumbled on this by chance and a wonderful chance indeed! Lovely n obscure,just the way I like it
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