After The Storm
May 25th, 2010 § 7 Comments
Thunder rumbled in
Lightning cracked the earth
The rains washed away
All that we built on the surface
Until all that remained
Was just a little isle
Barely enough for us to survive
I held you close
A shelter from the storm
While the emptiness consumed
All we couldn’t face alone
Little by little
The tides pushed harder
My world slipped out of place
As you slipped through my fingers
I tried to hold on
But my weakness became stronger
I had to give in
To the emptiness I surrendered
The sun shone later
Failing to light a bleaker world
Blistering all sense of purpose
To remind what was taken
I have passed many a season
Staring at empty horizons
Our memories setting like the sun
I will wait for you
As the skies turn shades darker
Until I am all but consumed
Yes I will wait for you
Until forever

Back with a bang, aren’t you?
“I tried to hold on
But my weakness became stronger
I had to give in
To the emptiness I surrendered”
I *loved* that bit. The rain did some good, it inspired a post out of you.
Good one and keep ‘em coming, i know there’s more
Nicely written bro!
Glad to see you posting again!
Loved it bro. Awesome stuff. keep it coming
Looking forward for more
Cheers!
I agree with Sabby on the “back with a bang”!
:I have passed many a season
Staring at empty horizons
Our memories setting like the sun
I will wait for you
As the skies turn shades darker
Until I am all but consumed
Yes I will wait for you
Until forever:
That was my favourite verse.
A pleasure as always, oh Unsilent One
:-*
brilliant!
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There’s always a sunshine after the storm. ^^, Nice work dear.